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2016 PitchWars Wishlist (Give Me ALL Your YA)

July 19, 2016 By Judi Lauren 4 Comments

About me (Why you should pick me):

Let me start by saying I’m a huge fan of eighties music. If you become my mentee, I will most likely discuss the great artists with you. And maybe force you to listen to a song or two. I’m a huge fan of Friends (Chandler is the best), Supernatural (Dean! Also, I wouldn’t mind seeing a YA book like this show), Christmas music, bookstores, all things Paris, road trips, and long walks on the beach (not really, but it makes for a nice ending).

Now that my infomercial stuff is out of the way…I’m represented by the awesome Tina Schwartz of the Purcell Agency, and I interned at Entangled Publishing for a while before becoming Lydia Sharp’s editorial assistant. Which means I get to spend my days reading and eating bon-bons, right? I’ve worked with a lot of YA for Entangled, as well as for separate clients. I was a mentor in Nightmare on Query Street (of 2015) where I went over the query/first 250 for both mentees. Both signed with agents shortly after the contest. They were that awesome. I mentored in FicFest earlier this year, which just came to a close with the agent round ending on July 14th. I mentored three writers (don’t ask) and my chosen mentee ended up with several requests through the contest. Because he’s awesome, he kindly had this to say about his experience working with me during FicFest:

“No matter how many times you look over your own manuscript, there are going to be areas of need you don’t see.  Judi was amazing at seeing where I needed to develop on big picture area (character development, theme), the craft of my words (I think she had ‘show, don’t tell’ pasted on repeat) to mechanics of the English language I was embarrassed to have misused (tenses…wow).  My manuscript wouldn’t be what it is today without her help.  She pushed me and that is exactly what you want in a mentor.  Besides that…Judi is a fan.  If she is your mentor, she is a fan of your work and a fan of you.  It’s a pretty great feeling to have someone like that in your corner. This isn’t something she does on the side, writing finds its way into every facet of her life.  If you are lucky enough to be partnered with Judi, your manuscript and writing in general will flourish.”

-Adam Schmitt (2016 FicFest mentee)

If that doesn’t convince you, I don’t know what will. So let’s move on to the good part.

What I’m looking for:

I’m a YA mentor this year, so I can only accept YA manuscripts. Please don’t waste one of your mentor picks on me if you’re subbing anything other than YA. If you need submission guidelines for this year’s Pitch Wars, you can find them here.

Contemporary—I love dark, angsty stories. I love mystery and thriller and romance (your book doesn’t have to have romance for me to pick you.) I love realistic contemporaries that show the gritty side of life. I don’t shy away from abuse/assault stories, as long as the crimes are shown as being wrong.  I’m very up for dark subject matter: kidnappings, trafficking, death, abuse, torture, runaways, etc. I sound like a sadist, but send it to me!

Light fantasy—pretty much the same as contemporary (including the dark subject matter). My favorite fantasy books are ones that are very character driven, like Harry Potter and Percy Jackson. If your book focuses more on the world building over anything else, it’s probably not right for me.

Light sci-fi—same thing as fantasy (with dark subject matter). I love, love stories that are character driven, so give me characters I will fall in love with. Think I Am Number Four.

Horror—I love character driven horror as well. Very high stakes, and have-to-flip-the-page urgency. Nothing’s really too dark for me.

Basically, I’m very open to a lot of things. I’m open to characters with disabilities, LGBTQ themes, characters of different races, etc. AND if you have a book that’s dark, but also humorous, I’m more than up for that, as long as I can fall in love with the voice.

Voice is very important to me. I’m sure you guys have seen that a lot, but it’s true. I have to connect with the voice of the story, and to me that (and characters I love) is more important than anything. We can fix dialogue and pacing and weird plot holes big enough for someone to fall through, but voice and characters are really important to me. I love to see characters survive something horrible/terrifying and how they deal with the aftermath.

I’m a fan of layered characters that have to make difficult choices but have the voice that’ll make a reader still love them. I love strong characters who pop off the page and leave me wanting to read more into their lives, even after the book is over. I am definitely fine with language, sex, and violence, but your characters don’t have to do all these things to make me love them.

I love stories set in big cities like New York, London, Paris, Amsterdam, Chicago, L.A., etc. If it’s set in a small town, I like it to feel like a small town. I like road trip stories and circus/carnival stories, but I also like books that don’t focus on travel. I told you guys I was open for a lot of things.

What I won’t read:

So this will be a short list.

Don’t send me a book where a little boy dies. If the book opens and he’s already dead, that’s fine. If he’s older than like 13 and dies, that’s fine. Younger than 13 and he dies on the page, I don’t want to see that. I’m fine to see them hurt or in peril, but if he dies, you’ve lost me.

I’m not the best for epic fantasies and/or books that revolve heavily on sports. If your character is part of a sports team, but it’s not the main focus of the story, I’m up for that. If it’s a big part of his/her life but not THE biggest part, I’m up for that too. Think the characters of One Tree Hill.

I may also not be the best choice for historicals, unless they’re very character-driven. I will take books based in the 60s-early 2000s.

Lastly, nothing with a preaching message. I don’t read to be taught some kind of lesson, so please don’t submit books like that to me.

And that’s it! Told you the list would be way shorter.

What to expect of me as a mentor:

Other than my awesome emails at two in the morning? If I choose you, I’ll do at least one pass through your manuscript and query letter. This includes line edits as well as a letter of big picture edits I feel need to be addressed. We’ll do a second pass if we have the time (I did it for my FicFest mentee). I’ll help you brainstorm. I’ll cheer you on. I’ll be around when you feel like giving up. I’ll be there for you long after the agent round is over. Basically when the picks are announced, you may meet your next best friend.

Favorite books (in no order):

I Hunt Killers by Barry Lyga

Sweethearts by Sara Zarr

The Perks of Being a Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky

You Don’t Know Me by David Klass

Meant to Be by Lauren Morrill

Nothing to Lose by Alex Flinn

The Outsiders by S.E. Hinton

Harry Potter series by J.K. Rowling

Percy Jackson series by Rick Riordan

I Am Number Four by Pittacus Lore

Let the Sky Fall by Shannon Messenger

The Accident Season by Moïra Fowley-Doyle

Unwind by Neal Shusterman

Aristotle and Dante Discover the Secrets of the Universe (still reading, but LOVE it)

To name a few. But if you don’t see anything similar to what you write on here, don’t fret. I have about two hundred other books I don’t have room to list and I never know how much I’ll love something until I actually read it.

I’m going to try to offer some type of feedback to those who submit to me. It may not be detailed, and depending on the number of subs I receive, it may not be feasible, but I will try my hardest. If I request a full MS from you, and don’t end up choosing you, then I will offer feedback definitely on it.

If you have any questions, feel free to leave a comment on this post or find me on Twitter @judi__lauren and I’ll give you an answer. Sending your work out takes a lot of guts for every one of you, whether you submit to us in PitchWars, or find another path. If you sub to me and aren’t chosen, know that I got my agent through my query letter. It does happen. Good luck to all submitting!

Oh and by the way, my letter for the scavenger hunt is L. Not even going to hide it from you in this incredibly long post.

 

1.


Phil Stamper

2.


Jenni L. Walsh

3.


Linsey Miller

4.


Jennifer Blackwood

5.


Amy Trueblood

6.


Laurie Elizabeth Flynn

7.


Kelly Ann Hopkins

8.


Kip Wilson Rechea

9.


Kristin Wright

10.


Amanda Foody

11.


Fiona McLaren & Dionne McCulloch

12.


Karen Fortunati

13.


Marty Mayberry

14.


Sarah Glenn Marsh & Shana Silver

15.


Monica M. Hoffman

16.


Heather Ezell

17.


Kate Karyus Quinn and Demitria Lunetta

18.


Erin Summerill & Rosalyn Eves

19.


Jamie Howard

20.


Ashley Hearn

21.


Charlie N. Holmberg

22.


Isabel Ibañez Davis
23.


Pintip Dunn

24.


Rachel Solomon & Kit Frick

25.


Mara Rutherford & Joan He

26.


Cat Scully & Kim Graff

27.


Lynnette Labelle and Destiny Cole

28.


Natasha Neagle

29.


Sonia Hartl

30.


Trisha Leaver & Kelly Calabrese

31.


Jessie Devine

32.


Ayesha Patel

33.


Helene Dunbar & Beth Hull

34.


Emily Martin

35.


Karen McManus

36.


Marie Meyer

37.


Jeanmarie Anaya

38.


Sharon Johnston

39.


Naomi Hughes

40.


Summer Spence

41.


Nikki Roberti

42.


McKelle George

43.


Monica B. Wagner & Kerbie Addis

44.


Rebecca Sky & Stacey Trombley
45.


M.K. England and Jamie Pacton

46.


Tabitha Martin

47.


Brian Palmer

48.


Brianna Shrum

49.


Molly E. Lee

50.


L.L. McKinney

51.


RuthAnne Snow

52.


Chelsea Bobulski

53.


Janella Angeles & Axie Oh

54.


Megan Lally & Katie Bucklein

55.


Kes Trester & Jen Hawkins

56.


Dannie Morin

57.


Stephanie Scott

58.


Sarah Nicolas & Leigh Mar

59.


Lizzy Charles

60.


Tobie Easton

61.


Lisa Amowitz

62.


Diana Gallagher

63.


Katherine Webber

64.


Judi Lauren

65.


Austin Aslan

66.


Dawn Ius

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Comments

  1. Stacey Trombley says

    July 20, 2016 at 2:37 pm

    Hey Judi! I’m a fellow YA mentor this year but I don’t believe we’ve met so just wanted to say hi! I’m an author with Entangled and love them so I’m a fan 🙂 I’m sure we’ll see each other around (Especially since it looks like we could be competing for similar books 😉 )

    Stacey

    Reply
    • Judi Lauren says

      July 20, 2016 at 3:57 pm

      Hey Stacey! Thanks! I saw your wishlist last night. Excellent taste in subs! 😉

      Reply
  2. Julie Walters says

    August 6, 2016 at 2:15 pm

    I just submitted to you and wanted to explain why. My ms is YA realistic contemporary showing a gritty side of life, the emotional struggle involved with overcoming being bullied. The MC survives horrible emotional abuse from home and school and this ms is the story of how she deals with the aftermath and overcomes. It features a f/f romance (with a sexual awakening ala Aristotle and Dante). I hope you enjoy it! Thank you for this opportunity and your consideration. Have a wonderful weekend!

    Reply
    • Judi Lauren says

      August 7, 2016 at 8:29 pm

      Aw thank you! I look forward to reading your submission 🙂

      Reply

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